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B is 27% done

Story moved along by dialogue when it could be done better or in a more subtle way ?

— Feb 21, 2026 09:35AM

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B is 64% done

If I see “grunted” one more time

— Feb 22, 2026 10:08AM

B is 56% done

Can’t have him losing consciousness at the end of half the chapters in a book…

— Feb 22, 2026 09:02AM

B is 54% done

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B is 37% done

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message 1: by Mithra (new) - added it

YES it’s so unsubtle and we don’t learn anything about inner motivations or character traits

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