Makenzie’s Reviews > The Hurricane Wars > Status Update

ok. the writing is pretty bad. it reminds me of an essay a high schooler is writing to try to get a higher word count and use fancy words. the plot itself has potential, but it skips a lot of info and also gave a ton of background in a short amount of time, making it hard to connect to the characters. i feel like so much has happened w no explanation, and the “enemies” is a joke. why are you alr straddling him?