Status Update

Brooke is 30% done

*spoiler alert, Jo da, I guess.*
This might end up being a DNF. There’s unnecessary detail in some places the totally lacking in others. Please tell me how a girl who has been training to protect herself under the tutelage of her mentor is so easily subdued by her deceptive boyfriend. I mean like really easily, pathetically so. So far, very disappointing writing.

— Feb 21, 2026 09:11PM