Majel’s Reviews > The Bridge Kingdom > Status Update

Its like the author had written a beginning, but then the editor said no, and so the author scrapped the entire thing and hastily rewrote the beginning chapters. The narration and descriptions are uneven. The beginning without almost any dialogue so I don't have much of a sense of who the main character is, setting and people without much description. And full of contradictions in descrptions for the protagonist.