Briana Berry’s Reviews > The Raven Scholar > Status Update

Meh. U was hoping for so much more. This reads SUPER YA… and the dialogue is stilted and clunky. It could have used some more editing for sure. Also WHY IS IT SO LONG!? I think with a few more times with an editor it could have been polished into something incredible. Also, the prologue seems like the novel will go in one direction and it goes in the completely different direction. Little disappointed.