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Notes:
(1) Neither any plot nor real feeling,
so, while well done it hits a ceiling.
- I find its simpleness appealing.
- For kids, but still, there's not much meat:
the subject matter's just on feet.
(2) The rhyming's crisp and not absurd.
- No cheating using nonsense words.
- Less Seussical but still preferred,
as one who rhymes, it's more a feat:
intuitive and easy beat.
— Feb 22, 2026 05:55PM

Notes:
(1) Neither any plot nor real feeling,
so, while well done it hits a ceiling.
- I find its simpleness appealing.
- For kids, but still, there's not much meat:
the subject matter's just on feet.
(2) The rhyming's crisp and not absurd.
- No cheating using nonsense words.
- Less Seussical but still preferred,
as one who rhymes, it's more a feat:
intuitive and easy beat.
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