Mehsi’s Reviews > A Pizza My Heart > Status Update

it was done this way. Would have better if they just kept it to the book, I have read enough choose your own adventure books that work fine on ereaders.

I have some more choices to go through, but the first one I picked (I choose to go with the girl) was very sweet.

Will give it 3 stars. Would have been 5 stars if it wasn't for the whole URL stuff.

Madam Miraval's Pizza Palace: Well, this was apparently a story that didn't take place in the book, instead you have to open a link. I can tell you, that doesn't work on a Kindle. At all. The page opens, yes, but getting anywhere, or reading the text is impossible. So -2 stars for that.
I had to type out the URL in my browser on my PC to get it to work, and then I quite liked the idea, but yeah, just a shame that1/2

Love Pizza No.9: 3 stars. A pretty cute story with a whole bunch of pizza, but the romance was predictable (I just knew what would happen at the end, and lo and behold it happened). I like Leo the most in the entire story. Parker was also nice, but I wonder if he he would have liked the MC if he hadn't eaten the pizza, after all he did use a nickname for her, and was pretty friendly and sweet. Curiouser and curiouser

Pizzamergency: 3.5 stars. Aww this was pretty cute! Baby goats, pizza, boyfriends, and much more. It was a bit plain, yes, but luckily goats are cute animals, plus it was fun to read how many baby goats were born. Also the romance between the MC and her boyfriend was really sweet, I also liked that even though he just finished his job he is helping out his girl.

Password is... : 2 stars. Pretty decent story, but I wanted to know what was going on with the guy. We don't really get an answer except that it is apparently pretty terrible, and it is a secret someone is willing to kill for to keep people silent. :| It was also the least pizza story in the entire book. :| I also didn't quite like the girl was so ill-prepared. Break in a house, and only have x minutes to do it?

The Pizza Guy: 3 stars. This was pretty much the other side of the first story. Just instead of Marco we have a Corey, but their jobs are pretty much the same. Not sure if this was on purpose, having two stories pretty much the same, or that they didn't check, but I did think it was a bit of a shame. It was good, hence the 3 stars, but eh, just a shame. Also Corey clearly cares more about money than his conscience.

Where There's Pizza: 2 stars. I am not really the kind of person to enjoy an animal's POV, not at least like this. The dog was just annoying. And then suddenly x and y happen and I was like, hold on what? How did we go from this to that? This story just didn't make sense, maybe it would have been better if it had just been from the human POV.

The Last Stop at the End of the World: 3 stars. Another sci-fi story, and a pretty decent one with enough worldbuilding that I could get a general picture of the place the MC and her boyfriend and his father lived. However, I just didn't see the love that was supposedly so much between the MC and her boyfriend. :| Of course it had pizza, it took place at a pizza place. The ending was good, though I wish for more.

Survival Pizza: 1 star. Um, what? It was quite a sad story, but really, I just wonder why this MC can't just ask help from anyone. I know, dad got kidnapped, blabla alive, blabla police is a bad idea. But scavenging food from a dumpster is just no. Living in your car? Also no. I just couldn't like this story, and just was hoping it would be over fast.

Pizza Buddy: An Orchard Pointe Story: 1 star. Sorry, but what? This story just seemed to drag on and on. So a girl who is being mean to her principal just finds a homeless guy behind the pizza place, chats up with him, offers all sorts of stuff, then leaves, and then some conversation between the homeless man and his dog, and that is it? *yawns*