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Z
is 47% done
The premise is just utterly ridiculous in context. He’s hiding from his past and doesn’t want to be seen and even was wary when he first met her; and she thinks he’s being sketchy at the supermarket yet…. cut to him inviting her to stay with him IN HIS APT. And she said yes???? Are they madly in love, in lust. They don’t know each other and aren’t lovebirds. Definitely doesn’t seem that way. -_-
— 5 hours, 22 min ago
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Z
is 51% done
He doesn’t want to go outside during the fire alarm, scared of being seen or worse introduced by her to someone. (But author made the mistake of saying these false alarms have happened at least twice before and he’s only been there like a month, so he never thought this would be a problem again??? Cmon) she goes outside and a woman says if you ever need help call me. And she knows the ma
— 4 hours, 59 min ago
Z
is 48% done
Ok so the did think lockdown would be 2 weeks long, and we all didn’t think it would be as long as it was but stilllllllll that’s a crazy thing to ask and agree to.
— 5 hours, 15 min ago
Z
is 47% done
Don’t get me started on the fact that neither of them told anyone they’re doing this. Really. A woman doesn’t tell a soul she’s moved in with a man. And a woman wrote this??? I have to do a lot of suspension of reality and beliefs to continue this
— 5 hours, 20 min ago
Z
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He’s ocd about cleanliness cuz he has an underlying condition, asthma. When she moves in she doesn’t see an inhaler
— 6 hours, 15 min ago
Z
is 31% done
Switching POVs from past to present is a device I like as stories unravel but it also switches from her to him and we recount similar situations from different perspectives. So far it’s not different enough to not be a drag, just shows his wariness;
They decide to move in together as lockdown is approaching
— 6 hours, 42 min ago
They decide to move in together as lockdown is approaching
Z
is 27% done
The Man is found fully dressed dead in his shower, missing for 2 weeks, front door ajar. Hrs staying for 3 months kinda like an Airbnb so that’s why it took so long;
2 rookie cops wet to scene first and turned off the dripping shower before veteran cop makes it there
— 6 hours, 45 min ago
2 rookie cops wet to scene first and turned off the dripping shower before veteran cop makes it there
Z
is 27% done
2 ppl meet serendipitously at a grocery store pre covid. He’s got some past, some trial and he’s wary that she’s a reporter undercover. She, so far as I can tell, is just excited cuz he’s so attractive.
— 7 hours, 2 min ago
