Endova’s Reviews > Of Blades and Wings > Status Update

Yeahhhh this amount of cursing in a story that's supposed to be taken entirely seriously makes this book feel very juvenile

Alfred: This guy killed a fae and their family bc of jealousy, so he lost his wings
Maddy, immediately: I wonder what that guy did to lose his wings

We get it. You have "shit" magic. The constant woe-is-me is already getting to me. And the more modern slang and constant cursing is really immersion breaking