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Wait is there gonna be another book? Bc Olivia’s romance didn’t really get wrapped up, at least not that I originally thought

Typo this should either be one sentence, or it’s missing a question mark after the first sentence

It feels like we’re trying to rush to get everything handled, like w/ Ruby’s short and sweet finding out/handling of the rumor situation. That was discovered and then done with so quickly, it feels like it almost has no weight to the story which is crazy tbh.

No im sorry this is ridiculous. You’re telling me that Olivia breaks it off with Washington OFF-PAGE?! This is the same dude she had a romance FOR THE ENTIRETY OF BOOK ONE. I liked Everett more for Olivia, but this is just bad on behalf of the writing.

“the ick that she felt”? NOOOOOOOOOOO
pop culture references (in a period piece, no less oml)

I’m sorry, THAT’S how we find out? Ruby, and subsequently us, is TOLD who’s behind the rumors? She doesn’t actually find it out for herself? That makes her seem so stupid, and it’s such a lazy thing to do for storytelling

Well girl what did you expect when you decided to court two dudes at the same time? Washington knew, but not Everett

Is Ruby not gonna tell her fiancé that his friend tried to make a move on her?