L.A.’s Reviews > Moon of the Crusted Snow > Status Update

Was excited for this but I can’t figure out who its audience is. It’s got a weird obsession with propriety, like it’s trying to teach the reader how to behave/what is “right,” making it seem very YA. (And schoolmarm-ish.)

Stilted character interactions and obvious dialogue.

Yeah, this isn’t going to break my reading slump.