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Nanette Tannahill
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Ummmm it's ok. Jumps around a lot, gives so much detail on peoples discussions but falls flat on the story line. It's starting to pick up now at chapter 8, I'm hoping the story comes together.
My biggest issue is the large over the top vocabular. it's unnecessary and makes the story not flow well.
— Mar 04, 2026 11:36PM
My biggest issue is the large over the top vocabular. it's unnecessary and makes the story not flow well.
