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This part is feeling very “in every life time? / in every one”

Sigh I miss FoJ

Ughhhh I hate the when they stuff obvious foreshadowing down my throat

Like now that I KNOW it’s protected conservation land I also KNOW the Problem Character is going to be an idiot & walk off path without a permit

Allergic reaction warning in the notes. One of the characters has an established allergy but this is still so wild to me.

Hm what would make for entertaining drama in my story after I just packed a ton of drama into two chapters of an otherwise child story… yeah I think he needs to be hospitalized. Why? Peanuts.

I take that last update back. I’m pissed again.

Gahhhh why’d the author have to make it more complicated by adding in this new character

First time in two chapters I’ve agreed with this characters decisions maybe??

Things are like happening but it’s not even fun I’m just annoyed. Like shut up.

I'm not joking (i wish i was) one of the characters legit hit the "He's right behind me isn't he" line.

So what if I'm logging this.
I just want it to go towards my challenge and page count.