Lalaculi’s Reviews > King of Wrath > Status Update
Lalaculi
is 95% done
too many redundant pages, a lot of redundant and recycled language (mia Cara, indignant, vindictive), and a lot of Italian without an italicized translation. If you start something, I think you should continue it throughout the book. She started off with italicizing the translations so I don’t see why she couldn’t do it consistently. And if Viv DOES speak 6 languages, why couldn’t she speak throughout either?
— Mar 06, 2026 10:54PM
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Lalaculi
is 71% done
She uses the word “indignation” too much but it’s still going well
— Mar 05, 2026 10:53PM

