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yup best chapter so far no way round it

i think this chaptwr is the most interesting for me so far

well there was 1 well written enjoyable paragraph since i last updated but the Doris chapter really is horrifying... (still badly written tho ㅠㅠ)

I'm sorry not sorry but this is exhausting to read (idk if its bc im tired from today ir if its just what it is)
but this ON THE NOSE "special" writing is pissing me off
you dont need to re-write "in 2hrs im gonna sit in the tram" fuck off this does not make u special in any way no. like i like cool things in books like so much but this is not cool this is what a 5 grader would do if you tell them to write special

"Die Wildnis bändigen und sie dann mit der Kultur zusammenstoßen lassen, das ist die Kunst"
uhmm-
no?.
i dont like this >>-<<

i must say the intent of the author is quite visible
at the moment TO ME it feels a little too on the nose how the "abnormalities" of the book are used- not the biggest fan (the poems and the full circle moment)
but maybe ill get around to it yeahhhh.

FOR GODS SAKE THE DIALECT IS SUCH AN ICK LIKE THIS GIVES ME THE FUCKING CREEPES MAKE IT STOPP OMG NOOOOOOOO
"ick weeß nich"
stop.
seriously.
what the fucks that?
no.

descriptions of "craziness" in "old" books/set in old time is so stupid wdymmmmm
but very funny till it won't be i guess 😭
(im not into these poems rn. so unlike me)

man.... that is so traumatizing
also annotating this will take so long what am i doing?

so far i am actually into the weird ahh writing (you know me)
but I'm scared of the plott ngl ㅠㅠ