Kyleah’s Reviews > The Serpent and the Wings of Night > Status Update

The FMC makes some of the dumbest decisions I have ever seen. She’s got layers of trauma

I was hoping for a little more action by now. There really isn’t even wording building. Just a lot of internal monologue. 🫠

Our FMC is a little annoying, but I can’t fault her for the lack of emotional maturity. (She has Stockholm syndrome.) Her fake daddy is a mega red flag and is hiding some serious secrets. The plot better take off like a race car soon because I’m a bit bored.

I’m slightly bored, and the repetitive “weak human” inner monologue is killing me. I find her annoying at the moment. Even though she probably lacks important emotional maturity for being 23, which is not her fault, she has Stockholm syndrome. Her fake dad is a 🚩🚨, and he’s got some SERIOUS SECRETS. I have faith this will get better, but I’m going to need the plot to pick up some speed.