Kate’s Reviews > Some Desperate Glory > Status Update

bruh where is this even coming from, based on what, you know he lies, he said literally one line

ok i’m back in

and no one ever thought to do that? also, if you can time travel AND become basically invulnerable during it how are the majo ever even at war in the first place, they could do and redo anything. also confused bc this seems like a plot point for 80% in not barely halfway

hello?? i feel like this makes no sense, also if the wisdom is in charge and has such a set plan how can avi just hack a single node of it and do something that drastic against its mission

she’s so annoying

i’m not against the trope of bigoted main character who slowly realizes the flaws in the conditioning of their society, but this feels like such an amateurish way of approaching it. they don’t even show any of the realization or growth or deconditioning, it’s literally verbatim like “and then the alien lectured me about eugenics and i thought abt it for the first time ever and realized they’re right”

basic enough story, both in plot and character development, but it’s fun! has some strange grammar and semantic mistakes tho