elif sinem’s Reviews > The Incandescent > Status Update
elif sinem
is 72% done
Something between the fantasy and the administrative elements and even the personal parts don't fully mesh. We're 3 quarters in and this protagonist still feels too remote and too much in need of being explained.
— Mar 08, 2026 03:11AM
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elif sinem
is 62% done
Well this mode suits the novel better though it's still too much told
— Mar 07, 2026 02:06AM
elif sinem
is 35% done
Oh sure so now the demon takes on the form of our main character's ex boyfriend and teenager whom she knew this whole time and also she gets a cool hair color when she is bound to a demon, pls be so fucking serious if I wanted bleach I'd just go and read that
— Mar 03, 2026 01:39PM
elif sinem
is 21% done
What's going to happen is this demon causing these kids to have extremely powerful Magic in the first place and the moral question being "shall we allow talent to prosper in the face of evil" won't it
— Mar 02, 2026 01:36PM
