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is 11% done
4%-11% several unrealistic things so far, taking me out of book immersion. amateurish?:
rain "gusting"
windshield wipers making windshield wetter and blurrier
burning /lips/ on pizza? roof of mouth, no?
how Shadow knew the calendar on warden's desk was far side? (presumably facing warden)
"A waitress wiped a cloth across the table and took their empty plates." (Cloth before clearing plates?)
— Feb 21, 2017 09:59AM
rain "gusting"
windshield wipers making windshield wetter and blurrier
burning /lips/ on pizza? roof of mouth, no?
how Shadow knew the calendar on warden's desk was far side? (presumably facing warden)
"A waitress wiped a cloth across the table and took their empty plates." (Cloth before clearing plates?)
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