WILL U READ’s Reviews > Finlay Donovan Jumps the Gun > Status Update

Javi’s arc is elaborated and things are investigated within their relationship with Vero. He’s like coming to the realizations. The way that Javi has that ____ Was it a joke? Adult jokes! The way that Finlay recognizes someone following them. It’s a red herring but it shows how Vero is on edge. It’s not good, let’s say.

Jumps the gun. I get it now. The police academy. I enjoyed the bar scene a lot. It had a lot of great comedy, Vero; got so excited but Finlay is like competing with two identities and she’s like I have less control but more control on the source of potential sources. It also makes her more questionable motives. The comedy is very adult ish. It also shows how gutsy or how Finlay is striding to make her path.

Finlay deliberates. She actually thinks things through. She consults Vero. Vero has a plan. The way that this scene brings a catalyst of unexpected twists and progresses he plot forward and adds the right amount of gravitas and energy. It’s a total action and mystery scene. Feliks is definitely Kingpin type of stuff. The moral compass of Finlay is interesting discussion. Writing improved by scene due to last book

Tonally the book paces is fast.Things are interesting.The best part of this series id the opening hook and scene. Wow! We explore how this book focuses on Vero more. On how Steven wants Finlay more than anything. The irony/foreshadowing of how Finlay lets Steven have Delia and Zach over for a week is interesting. I find the idea that Finlay needs to rework stuff. Vero is worried that Finlay convinced by Steven!