Chelsea Moreen’s Reviews > Amari and the Night Brothers > Status Update
Chelsea Moreen
is 2% done
I won’t be dnf-ing this at all but there is parts of this that are really irritating me. Why is Amari apologising and suffering the consequence of her mother making her late to the camp, why is her mother not apologising at all, it makes no logical sense and is pretty rubbish writing. There’s been a few instances like this already and it’s drawing me out of the story
— Mar 13, 2026 02:06AM
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Chelsea Moreen
is 75% done
Girl if you see people doing shit and don’t copy that stuff and then act all confused when you have no idea what is going and get in trouble on one more time
— Mar 13, 2026 05:55AM
Chelsea Moreen
is 30% done
RIGHT IF A CHARACTER IS SAYING YE IT MEANS SHES CELTIC SND SHE SHOULD HAVE A CELTIC ACCENT IN THW AUDIOBOOK DA FRICK
— Mar 13, 2026 03:20AM
Chelsea Moreen
is 2% done
I’ve always really enjoyed MG novels so I was really excited for this but the writing style is not clicking so far, I’m kinda worried I won’t like it all :/
— Mar 12, 2026 11:45AM
