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Fangs!!!!????what kind of 'people' are in this world.. halos, fangs, gold and red blood...

Have no idea what the problem is with weavers. How wren sudden became one because of a .... when and how did this happen and what do yhe weavers do... are they typical or something bad as hinted upon in this story

While the plot has moved towards its goal, it dragged along because of way too much internal ramblings. Yes, I get it, it happened, he feels guilty, but the reader doesn't need to be reminded every chapter centered on this character.

And there are three other characters who also gets to mope about thier guilt, hisory, struggles on repeat.

I AM BORED!

Skimming to finish

I guess he has a halo also but is it the same as wren because this guy has wings... does wren, though i think he's half of something and something...

When did wren get a halo... why does he have one what does it look like? Is it different than what the other guy has on his neck, which are gems(?). Why/are they disappearing.

Character descriptions are. Are too damn nonexistent. Ruining what could be a good story but I get pulled out because of character inconsistencies!

Lost a star because of this.

There are 4 MC, and each have thier own POVs, but their introductions were not done very well! Their descriptions are vague! So far, I believe one isn't human, another I think they might not be either, but the other 2 have no clue!

The plot has me, but the characters pull me out because there are fangs, wings, different eye colors... nothing is concrete.

And what is meant by them 'kissing their teeth'?