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Dan Elliott
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Zomi is a much more interesting character than anything we saw in grace of kings. This has started much much stronger. The only thing I thought was lame was the orchid teaching the god of war how to be a god of war. The wisdom from the orchid was too stupid a concept for me to ignore it.
— Mar 15, 2026 03:55AM
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Dan Elliott
is on page 196 of 880
Zomi’s story is much more emotional and personal than anything from book 1 and the political intrigue is much more developed. Things are explained to us but through the eyes of children rather than direct exposition.
— 5 hours, 59 min ago
Dan Elliott
is on page 65 of 880
Significant improvement on the first. Both the prose and the structure are much more enjoyable.
— Mar 13, 2026 07:04AM
