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The bumpy writing, rapidly alternating POVs (most chapters are quite short) and slow pacing make this a relatively trudging experience. I like the themes but there's a lot that thrown around and not picked up again... I hope the ending wrap this up well, because a lot is hanging on it, at this point.
— Mar 16, 2026 08:25AM
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It's one of those books where I am both genuinely interested and never itching to get back to it - not sure why, maybe the short chapters with alternating POV combined with the slow, introspective nature of it. The writing is good but also not entirely natural and easy flowing for me (not in a bad way, just a matter of getting into a style) but I wonder if that doesn't compound with the above, too.
— Mar 06, 2026 03:19PM
