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Ok 49 pages in, it’s feeling like a 3/5 so far!
💗 Writing: A lot of the metaphors aren’t landing, namely: “”GAHOH-Oh-gosh.” My body jolts like a boomer being shown one of those videos of a baseball flying straight at the camera.” or just the awkward fancy words?
💗 Vibes: Loving the scenery, the football field, Seabrook, loveee it!!!
💗 Plot: Hoping the pace picks up a bit faster soon🤞
— Mar 18, 2026 02:17PM
💗 Writing: A lot of the metaphors aren’t landing, namely: “”GAHOH-Oh-gosh.” My body jolts like a boomer being shown one of those videos of a baseball flying straight at the camera.” or just the awkward fancy words?
💗 Vibes: Loving the scenery, the football field, Seabrook, loveee it!!!
💗 Plot: Hoping the pace picks up a bit faster soon🤞
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💗 Writing style: It’s very YA, but then she drops in random words like “monosyllabic” which is a little confusing. I think the writing is pretty standard!
💗 Plot: It’s feeling a little cliché with the football scene, but still enjoyable. There’s just not a lot of forward momentum.
💗 Vibes: All is to say, I love the setting. I’m obsessed with Seabrook I think. It’s a lot more vibes than plot.
— Apr 04, 2026 03:13PM
💗 Plot: It’s feeling a little cliché with the football scene, but still enjoyable. There’s just not a lot of forward momentum.
💗 Vibes: All is to say, I love the setting. I’m obsessed with Seabrook I think. It’s a lot more vibes than plot.
