Sharondblk’s Reviews > The Dropouts > Status Update

there are some weird inconstancies that should have been picked up by an editor, including:
they have been doing something for 3 weeks, and the text says "after months of".
Someone is having a medical emergency, and the landline doesn't work. A medical team is summoned by email. where is everyone's mobiles?
It's enough to pull me out of the sotry.