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Elif
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"does she relax" is a question sentence and doesn't state a situation like you intended, it should be "she does relax" - "keeps himself to himself" also not written like that, is supposed to be "he keeps to himself" - English isn't my first language but I try to pay attention, this is so sloppy!! there are too many mistakes for my liking and she didn't even tried to fix them even though people commented on some...
— Mar 22, 2026 06:12AM
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is 18% done
"still long way to go to get to the pack house" should have been "still long way to the pack house" - I have seen somewhere that this one been fixed and it's name changed but I'm reading it with this one and it has writing mistake in it; like she wrote "too" instead of "to" or like first one. also, why did she keep adding Alpha or Beta to in front of the names, just one would be enough to identify them.
— Mar 21, 2026 04:50PM