Tiffany’s Reviews > Makai > Status Update

I love grey but she’s too descriptive with her writing. A lot of these details (like how the banana peels before she eats it lol) etc is just simply not needed. It doesn’t bring anything to the scene and just almost seems like a waste of words. Now dont get me wrong she’s very poetic and intentional with her writing but sometimes its unnecessary and long drawn. Still excited to continue