mallow ’s Reviews > The Hunting Wives > Status Update

I want to know what happens so bad I’m gonna keep at this and it’s not like a heavy read, but the weird chopped up sentences and the constant jumping around are so weird. Like do we need to start the story a week before a party, then skip ahead to said party, then flashback to when she got invited to the party? Couldn’t we have just told that in order lmfao?