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evtoriaa
is 29% done
Okay, the actual story line has been revealed and I’m interested now .. but … the dialogue doesn’t fit? I’m supposed to believe that 4 and 9 year olds talk like this? I keep having to flip back to the start of the chapter to remind myself whose pov I’m in …
— Mar 23, 2026 08:19PM
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evtoriaa
is 15% done
Ehh.. I’m kinda confused. I don’t like how the storyline is being introduced. And the dialogue is repetitive
— Mar 21, 2026 09:36PM
