Elisabeth Nadler’s Reviews > Fellowship of Broken Doves > Status Update

Obviously I'm hooked. I don't usually commit to books and read them this fast! Heck, I hardly read at all these days unless the story captures me... Well... this story captured me. There are abundant writing errors, but I've got plenty of my own in my books! And yes, there are moments where it reads like something from the Dreame Story ap that I used to have on my phone, but this is worlds better. I gotta finish!

I knew it!! With most of the twists in the story so far I had my suspicions, so none of them surprised me, yet they made me happy! But darnit!! I'm supposed to be writing my book today, but I can't stop reading.

Follow up on earlier update: First it was "I loved her too much", then Chap 10 he says they met a couple times but "she never spoke to me", & now I just read that our MMC danced & spoke with her often? With the 2 out of 3 I'll just assume the statement in Chap 10 isn't meant to be there. Which is fine, I still like it so far! And I have suspicions of certain things (plot-wise) & I'm giddy (yes, giddy), to find out!

I am so confused about the MMCs relationship with a mentioned character that hasn't personally come into play yet and might never (but maybe they will?). At the very beginning he says he "loved her too much" and what I just read now was that he only met her a couple times and she never spoke to him. But... I'm hooked now. I need to know everything and how it ends!

This is interesting! A long time since I've read fantasy (probably LOTR). I felt like I jumped into the middle of a story, not stepped but jumped. A little difficult so far understanding the world this is built in, but I'm guessing all that will be unraveled. I'm excited to find out!
One thing about something in the very beginning. "Get soandso name out of your f'in mouth" had to be a total throwback to Will Smith!