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I really wanted to enjoy this one!
But I couldn’t find a way to connect to the characters and as a murder mystery the characters were doing things that made me go “but why?!”
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This felt like it needed a bit more editing and research to give the characters and plot more depth. It felt too superficial and the story beats that should have hit hard… barely left a dent
— 3 hours, 18 min ago
But I couldn’t find a way to connect to the characters and as a murder mystery the characters were doing things that made me go “but why?!”
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This felt like it needed a bit more editing and research to give the characters and plot more depth. It felt too superficial and the story beats that should have hit hard… barely left a dent
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