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Mildly interested in the plot. Too much exposition delivered in a way that is unappetizing to my care
— Mar 24, 2026 06:49PM
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Mar 24, 2026 07:21PM
I think there are bits of interesting creative writing, but I haven’t enjoyed it much when it feels the story is being told to me, rather than me experiencing it. I also feel like I’m supposed to like Hallie, but when I step back and think of her as a character, she doesn’t have many likable traits.
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