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I do like the writing style and there is quite a bit of humor in it, but the individual stories are so sad and frustrating in a why. Each character seems delusional /unaware of his/her own fallacies.
5 hours, 3 min ago
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Astrid Appels
Astrid Appels is on page 142 of 272
Hmmm, while I appreciate the command in language and vocabulary, the sentence structures often feel long and monotonous.. sentences feel like long spaghetti strings. Not so much appreciating the three first main characters’ shared trait of degrading themselves. There is a lot of self-pity, frustration and isolation there and little problem solving.
Mar 20, 2026 04:40PM
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