Soňa’s Reviews > Embalmed Shadows > Status Update

Chapter 20... ok, so you know what she is... and you write a goodbye letter and take calibre .38 with 6 bullets (no silver, no holy water, nothing)... ehmmm... am I the only one shouting here what a mess? :D

ehmm... we have a little problem, chapter 12 and 13 are almost identical :( but well, at least we have the BIG baddie here so maybe the story will get more interesting...

Chapter 12, finally the Encounter... There are too many repetitive moments... Editing wouldn't hurt this book

chapter 7.... it is a dirty boook, but let me question this, why every woman has to have nipple piercings? New trend I've missed??? :D

Chapter 5: Second Victim – The Pierced Raver