Sav > Status Update

This is Fanfiction-level bad. I mean, SO bad. I actually had to look up the author's picture because she writes like someone I used to RP with over 10 years ago. Facepalm. Example sentence: "His mind traveled to the thought he had held whilst within the woods, the thought that had meant he would be acknowledging what he secretly knew when she had descended into a Lycan Creature." Hope Parris gets the editor she needs