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is 53% done
The pacing feels slow, especially for a story that should feel tense and gripping. The gore isn’t particularly shocking either—it’s there, but it doesn’t add much impact or urgency.
These feel like important pieces of the story, but without more context or depth, it’s hard to connect to the characters or fully understand their motivations.
At this point, I’m still waiting for something to pull me in.
— 5 minutes ago
These feel like important pieces of the story, but without more context or depth, it’s hard to connect to the characters or fully understand their motivations.
At this point, I’m still waiting for something to pull me in.

