Laura’s Reviews > Cade > Status Update
Laura
is 33% done
There's weird continuity things where Cade and Jon talk to themselves about the other as their mate then there's a moment of knee jerk reaction bc since when is X my mate? Plus so many little grammar things!! Frustrating to read.
— Mar 02, 2017 12:10PM
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Laura
is 42% done
Something about this pacing. Cade's story doesn't make me wanna cry any tears. Like, idk if lack of character development or the way he tells it, but doesn't touch heartstrings.
— Mar 02, 2017 02:16PM
