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Diane Johnson
is 26% done
I feel like the heavy usage of metaphor has me avoiding the read in general to this point, but this last segment about dad taking a trek through the snow to get to his workshop, and the remainder of that day is pretty good story telling. I’m invested in the story at this point, 25% in.
— Apr 02, 2026 02:54PM
Diane Johnson
is 16% done
Guin as a 5yr old feels does not ring true to the age imo. I would peg her at age 7 minimum, maybe 8. Her understanding of things, and her use of language feels older than 5.
— Mar 29, 2026 10:12AM

