Thyri Manon’s Reviews > You're Next > Status Update

Still feels like a weak copy of the Lords of Forsyth.
Dislikes

No real concept , poor choice of age group, the book idea vers undeveloped. The characters, their status details doesn't add up.
Fmc- too pick me, too bold for her own good, no character development. Simple and has no idea what she wants.
Some mmc has personality, some not, but ultimately better written characters than fmc, with a bit of arch.