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I’m still in the first chapter and I’m already annoyed. Is this seriously how we’re introducing all the players in the story? It feels so lazy. Someone please tell me the storytelling gets better. I try not to judge an entire work by its first chapter but come on man
— Mar 29, 2026 06:44AM

