Lindsay Longacre’s Reviews > The Silversmith > Status Update

it’s funny how much it’s mentioned that the main character in this book is frail, weak, childish, and useless 😂 it’s like the author wants remember that she’s kinda pathetic the whole time 😂

also, way too many ellipsis and italics. not every one of her thoughts needs a dramatic pause or emphasis. not trying to be a hater, the writing is just not my favorite right now

unless there’s a whole fated mates thing going on here, these two are acting way too into each other after only knowing each other for four days. and not in a good way. it seems forced.