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Ky Simpson is on page 38 of 352
I love her to death, but so far, there is a whole lot of “telling” over “showing” and difficult to follow transitions in the writing that makes it hard to look past and be immersed in the story
Mar 29, 2026 10:13PM
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Ky Simpson
Ky Simpson is on page 242 of 352
“It was as if he had kept my dreams safely tucked away next to his all this time. Like whether or not I achieved them was just as precious to him as it was to me.”
Apr 16, 2026 11:52AM
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Ky Simpson
Ky Simpson is on page 178 of 352
“So, I bowed my head and kept my wrists devotedly together, forever caught in his invisible grasp.“

“He’s the only one standing still amid the maelstrom.“

“the sound is light and giddy, like a child’s surprised delight at seeing bubbles for the first time”
Apr 13, 2026 06:17AM
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Ky Simpson
Ky Simpson is on page 112 of 352
Some good lines! There are lots of inconsistencies that I’m a little upset about. Her aunt is only bad at English on the first page, and Peppy Teenager is Happy on another page. Idk, I just feel like her editor could’ve worked harder.

“My ‘todays’ would never look the same, but the dishes were still dirty.”
Apr 07, 2026 12:01PM
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