Adrian Major Hope’s Reviews > Basketball Wives > Status Update

I'm disappointed with the book, the storyline has potential but the attention to details, typos and goof ups are far too many.

The typos are starting to reallu bug me. They are absolutely careless mistakes that should have been fixed.

Another inconsistency, Sydney mentioned in chapter one at dinner that she was married for 4 years. During her srgument with Brian in chapter 3 she says 5 years married.

I'm already finding some errors in spelling and inconsistencies in the storyline. The girl Britney mentioned how she had no ring and was okay with it as long as he kept buying her nice things. Then a chapter later her name changed to Brittany and she has been married for six months. The problem is that chapter 2 takes place a few minutes after chapter 1.