Gustavo Aviles’s Reviews > Catching Kyle: Football Heartthrobs Book One > Status Update
Gustavo Aviles
is 22% done
All the grammatical errors are making it difficult to enjoy. Dropped prepositions, repeated words and phrases, dangling modifiers.
— Mar 30, 2026 05:33PM
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Gustavo Aviles
is 51% done
Half-way and we’re introduced new trope? It feels too late in the game (pun intended) to be adding new thematic and narrative elements.
— Mar 31, 2026 03:45PM