Tati ’s Reviews > The Sun and the Starmaker > Status Update

I SWORE to never read anothet Rachel Griffin book.
But here we are.

She still loves to use the word vast it seems.

Also... lack of editing? How many times in a chapter can she write "said"? 😭 he said, she said, aspen said, aurora said, mother said. We get it.

He said, she said, aurora said, aspen said, elsie said, mother said.

Who is the editor for this book? I guess I am just extra critical due to my intense dislike of wild is the witch. And it is clear as day; not much has changed- in regarda to her writing style, other than it's written in third person.

She is still in love with the word "vast" it seems