Ellie’s Reviews > The Perfect Son > Status Update

the book is getting better I think but frieda girl I don't think I can keep reading your books

The writing so far is not great. Every chapter ends with basically a reiteration of 'everything was fine... until the incident' or 'she seems nice but can be mean sometimes... I've seen it before' like omg STOPPPPPP this is not foreshadowing this is just annoying lol