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Kathy
is 80% done
Uneven voice/tone in both the narration and dialogue is really starting to bother me at this pt
— Apr 24, 2026 07:15AM
Kathy
is 70% done
interesting world-building to justify and communicate the themes of the universally transfemme cyborgs. obvious, sometimes heavy-handed allegorical analysis of modern life via spec-fi dystopia lens. a large drawback to me, personally: POV character Dragonfly sometimes uses therapy speak, which fully breaks my immersion. she wouldn’t know how to say what she means!! let her communicate badly!!!
— Apr 16, 2026 08:29AM
Kathy
is 33% done
“violence as intimacy” theme. also the first male character appears no sooner than 30% of the way into the novel. a real winner 👍
— Apr 08, 2026 11:31AM

