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Elizabeth
is 20% done
The dialogue seems unrefined and has taken me out of the story more than once. The writing overall also feels like it was written by a novice writer. Although, the story so far has entertained me.
— 22 hours, 58 min ago
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Elizabeth
is 19% done
The dialogue is unrefined and has taken me out of the story more than once so far. The writing overall also seems like that of a novice writer. Although, I can say I’m enjoying the story itself so far.
— 23 hours, 3 min ago
