Vanadia Permall’s Reviews > The Heartbeat Library > Status Update

I’m not sure why this one has been such a slog. The English is easy and straightforward…it should be a quick read. I just can’t seem to get into it. There’s way too much telling instead of showing, and it makes it really hard to get immersed in the story. Not sure if it’s the structure or all the telling, but something’s just not clicking for me.